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RCS编辑给我的回信,这是什么意思呀?

RAR格式可以!

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Have you said "Hi" to new chem8ers today?
http://chem8.org/bbs/thread-15957-1-1.html
How to get the ebooks I introduced?
http://chem8.org/bbs/thread-17039-1-1.html
RCS被拒后,十天前投到ICC上!
早上起来看完金牌榜,看到羽毛球团体胜啦,后来再看看我老板的邮箱,没想到审稿人来信啦,请大家帮我分析一下,好像问题多多呀,可怕!

Dear prof. X X,

Reviewers have now commented on your paper. You will see that they are advising that you revise your manuscript. If you are prepared to undertake the work required, I would be pleased to reconsider my decision.  Also, I would suggest to leave the TGA figure in supplementary, and follow the comments of reviewers for revision.



Reviewers' comments:


Reviewer #1: The work presents the structure and some properties of zinc complex with an interesting, new ligand. I think it is worth publishing but I also list the problems that should be fixed first.
1)    The quality of the figures -especially fig.2 - is very low. It makes pictures incomprehensible
2)    I have not found the table with hydrogen bonds in cif - it SHOULD be included for the full description of the crystal structure
3)    What are the authors' final conclusions concerning photoluminescent properties of the obtained compound - is the complex a promising candidate for the photoactive material?
4)    For me the text is written clearly enough. There is only one phrase I do not understand i.e. „By administrating a reaction..." and I'd rather write "….utilizing ….which…"  instead of "…with utilizing…..whose…"
5)    Minor problems with references: 2c was published in (2004); 6e and 7a do not describe MOF but  inorganic complexes and should be omitted; 9a - does it really give the description of influence of metal on the structure of MOFs?; 24b begins from p. 2397 not 239
I recommend the paper for publication in Inorganic Chemistry Communications after minor revision




Reviewer #2: The manuscript describes the synthethis, the characterization carried by x-ray diffraction, thermanl analisys and solid state emission spectroscopy of a new polymeric zinc complex.
As a whole the experimental data are roughly presented and scarcely commented. Thus, although the investigated compound is somehow quite interesting, the manuscript have to be severely improved to be considered for publication.
In particular the Authors should paid attention to the following points:
-    the sketch of the tfpbbp formula should be added;
-    the Zn(II) coordination sphere has to be better and clearly described: the difference between the Zn(1)-O(1) and the Zn(1)-O(2) bond length is very high and as the Zn(1)-O(2) distance (2.4094 A) could also account for a non-bonding interaction, the Zn(II) ion could be better described as in a pseudo-pentacoordinated geometry instead of a distorted bipyramid geometry. A comment should be added.
-    Figure 2 is of very poor quality, could the Authors provide a clearest rapresentation of the 3D structure?
-    Figure 3 is not essential, it should be omitted;
-    The "Pictogram" is absolutely incomprehensible,
-    The english has to be improved througout the whole text.
Concluding, the manuscript has to be deeply revised before acceptance.

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  • niuniu123 在2006-12-6 12:01 评分: 金币 +5 原因: 感谢分享

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第二个审稿人提出的问题,想请大家帮我看看,怎样表达才好?谢谢!

the Zn(II) coordination sphere has to be better and clearly described: the difference between the Zn(1)-O(1) and the Zn(1)-O(2) bond length is very high and as the Zn(1)-O(2) distance (2.4094 A) could also account for a non-bonding interaction, the Zn(II) ion could be better described as in a pseudo-pentacoordinated geometry instead of a distorted bipyramid geometry. A comment should be added

其实这个问题,新手我感觉上次在CHEM8也问过一个类似的问题:
http://chem8.org/thread-587-1-1.html
当然那里只是讨论的五配位,而这里审稿人要求评价ZN-O键长的问题!

some suggestions

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原帖由 niuniu123 于 2006-12-8 13:38 发表
some suggestions
这两天我到外面去啦,刚回家!

我同学也替我把审稿理见一一开啦,过程中,按第二审稿人说图文摘要含糊不清的问题,我们把摘要改啦。

谢谢牛牛老师对我的MS的进一步polish,我现在正按照修改的内容写cover letter!

实在不好意思!谢谢!

昨天投了修改稿,
今天早上文章接受!

谢谢大家帮助新手!!!

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  • Mcdull 在2006-12-15 12:36 评分: 金币 +5 原因: 嗯 恭喜 可以考虑去真我风采区发帖哈 那里200大洋伺候
祝你胜利!

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